Well done on your submission, you’ve definitely covered the brief in quite a lot of detail here so well done on that.
A couple of things that I noticed that would be a good thing to have a look at.
The first one is a really easy fix around your grids within your report. A lot of these don’t seem to line up and to me it detracts from the value you have presented with the visualisation’s and calculations. So just simply making sure your rectangles and squares representing your grids are in line will make the dashboard more compelling.
Also just with your colour palette, it’s great to hear that you’re using the colour theme generator, but just make sure that the palate is consistent. Sometimes there is beauty in simplicity of colours. So don’t feel you have to use a lot of different colours for your insights. Simplifying things down a bit I think will add a bit of value to your presentation.
I like how you have looked to create a calculation around when the next appointment is, so you’ve got to think outside the box which I think is great.
Really well done overall, just a couple of really small tidy ups and I think you’ll have a really professional looking report that would make any consumer very engaged in your insights.