I love the way you’ve used the dynamic grouping technique in your report. This is a really powerful analytical technique that can bring insights to your data that ordinarily don’t exist in its rawest form. I think starting off at that point was a good idea because it can showcase new insights that the consumers maybe haven’t even thought of before.
I also really really like the simplicity of your report. I’m a big believer in not overburdening the consumer with charts and visualizations if the same insights can effectively be showing with a summarized and easy to consume verion.
I think you’ve also looked to be unique here and break things down with your planning, medical pages. Again is simple an effective.
And the colors work really well, also the fact you have broken out the left I and right I results with the change in score, which not many submissions actually had.
Overall this is actually a really compelling submission.
One really small thing maybe to have a look at is the difference in border shapes on the medical page. I would have just gone for all rectangle borders rather than mixing in curved rectangular borders around the left eye and right by data. With UI design you would rarely mix these two together I feel. This is just a small thing but just really one of the only small areas that I can see for improvement here because in reality this is a superb report which answers everything in the brief.